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by ravenrussell
Sat Oct 22, 2016 12:14 am
Forum: Literature
Topic: Alice's Works
Replies: 26
Views: 2073

Re: Alice's Works

Omg, your newest poems are absolutely stunning. Poor is Permanent, and One Minute are substantial and complete. I love all of these new ones. You are growing into your words and vice versa. Amazing, I truly mean it. one minute I think needs some work, but I don't know where to start. I like it, and...
by ravenrussell
Fri Oct 21, 2016 7:22 am
Forum: Random
Topic: NINJA BANTER!!!!1!!1!1!1!!1!!!!!!!1
Replies: 1619
Views: 425957

Re: NINJA BANTER!!!!1!!1!1!1!!1!!!!!!!1

She said she just wanted to be friends, ouch! I can do that.
by ravenrussell
Fri Oct 21, 2016 6:32 am
Forum: Literature
Topic: Exclusive to Ninja, Poems by Russell.
Replies: 38
Views: 2431

Re: Exclusive to Ninja, Poems by Russell.

Okay dude I can barely keep up with how prolific you are. THAT SAID I'm gonna set myself a goal to give feedback (from my limited perspective, which includes such credentials as three Spanish language poetry courses at the university, having lots of crushes on English instructors throughout grade s...
by ravenrussell
Fri Oct 21, 2016 6:03 am
Forum: Random
Topic: NINJA BANTER!!!!1!!1!1!1!!1!!!!!!!1
Replies: 1619
Views: 425957

Re: NINJA BANTER!!!!1!!1!1!1!!1!!!!!!!1

I finally got up the balls to ask a girl on a date, I've liked her forever. Asked her via messenger, because I'm a school kid around her, and can't ask her to her face. Waiting for the response like the nerd that I am, asking out the prom queen. God, I wish I could just think that I was the shit. It...
by ravenrussell
Fri Oct 21, 2016 12:48 am
Forum: Literature
Topic: Alice's Works
Replies: 26
Views: 2073

Re: Alice's Works

Omg, your newest poems are absolutely stunning. Poor is Permanent, and One Minute are substantial and complete. I love all of these new ones. You are growing into your words and vice versa. Amazing, I truly mean it.
by ravenrussell
Wed Oct 19, 2016 7:47 am
Forum: Literature
Topic: Writing prompt #5: Those we admire
Replies: 19
Views: 1193

Re: Writing prompt #5: Those we admire

I'm not sure, in Washington state there are Teriyaki restaurants everywhere. Almost every strip mall has a different one. It is a Japanese dish. We also have tons of sushi places. Maybe I'm luckier than I thought over here.
by ravenrussell
Mon Oct 17, 2016 10:14 pm
Forum: Literature
Topic: Writing prompt #5: Those we admire
Replies: 19
Views: 1193

Re: Writing prompt #5: Those we admire

Slightly late to the party, but here's your moderator's contribution! -- The people who I ended up looking up to as a kid positively generally fell into two categories: The consistent and the remarkable. The remarkable folks achieved skill in whatever interest or interests they might have had. Some...
by ravenrussell
Sun Oct 16, 2016 10:53 pm
Forum: Literature
Topic: Writing prompt #5: Those we admire
Replies: 19
Views: 1193

Re: Writing prompt #5: Those we admire

RavenRussell, this is so, so, so beautiful. I feel really fortunate to know this much more about you. And now I get the privilege of reading your work with a sort of "exegesis" treatment, for lack of a better term, meaning I'll be able to read your work with a particular kind of critical ...
by ravenrussell
Sun Oct 16, 2016 10:49 pm
Forum: Literature
Topic: Writing prompt #5: Those we admire
Replies: 19
Views: 1193

Re: Writing prompt #5: Those we admire

That is beautiful. It really is. I wish I could say I loved something that much! Maybe chicken tenders/nuggets. I can honestly write forever about my love for these and how different they are at all the different locations and really go into depth. I dont even use sauce as i feel it desecrates the ...
by ravenrussell
Sun Oct 16, 2016 10:44 pm
Forum: Literature
Topic: Writing prompt #5: Those we admire
Replies: 19
Views: 1193

Re: Writing prompt #5: Those we admire

Stories are wonderful manifestation within the minds who remember them. Some stories are funny, some are grand, while others may be sad or even evil in nature. This story falls more into the former category in that it is funny story about a small girl and her parents. It was a dark and stormy night...
by ravenrussell
Sat Oct 15, 2016 7:47 pm
Forum: Lets Talk About Sex, Baby
Topic: Thoughts on Modern Mating
Replies: 6
Views: 643

Re: Thoughts on Modern Mating

Darkside, that's a well thought out piece. I agree with it whole heartedly. You put into words what I've had trapped in me. I love it. Thanks for contributing to this thread.
by ravenrussell
Sat Oct 15, 2016 12:44 am
Forum: Literature
Topic: Drop Your Phone and Read This as Intentioned on a Desktop
Replies: 6
Views: 670

Re: Drop Your Phone and Read This as Intentioned on a Desktop

its tripped out.. i actually have a painting in the works within the very same scope of this.. //as this is posted from my mobile device. :lawl: I look forward to seeing your piece. I tried to keep my own personal disdain from this poem, but I think it still drips of sarcasm. I wanted there to be a...
by ravenrussell
Fri Oct 14, 2016 7:23 am
Forum: Comics and Collectors' Corner
Topic: NaranjaRa's Geeky Collections
Replies: 49
Views: 5051

Re: NaranjaRa's Geeky Collections

Nostalgia is so expensive. I'm glad you find affordable memories. Cool collection.
by ravenrussell
Fri Oct 14, 2016 7:10 am
Forum: Lets Talk About Sex, Baby
Topic: Thoughts on Modern Mating
Replies: 6
Views: 643

Thoughts on Modern Mating

I'm not good at sport fucking, because I've never been good at sports. I am not a fuck buddy, because my buddies don't fuck me. I only know how to make love, because that's what I'm made of, love.
by ravenrussell
Fri Oct 14, 2016 4:39 am
Forum: Literature
Topic: Ninja Chain
Replies: 23
Views: 1955

Re: Ninja Chain

Lilac, named for his opposing scent to said flower, picked up the narrator's voice. "You all will go back and reread this complete thread. You will ignore my words here and carry on a fantastic story," he said quite emphatically. "I have become the rare instance of a voice not from yo...
by ravenrussell
Fri Oct 14, 2016 3:59 am
Forum: Literature
Topic: Writing prompt #5: Those we admire
Replies: 19
Views: 1193

Re: Writing prompt #5: Those we admire

"Mother of Poems" My mother, my deepest admiration point, brought me up in a world of free and honest discussion. She daily told me something that would blow my mind. She allowed me to do the same for her. She allowed me to read her to sleep every night. This encouraged in me a fine love o...
by ravenrussell
Fri Oct 14, 2016 3:42 am
Forum: Literature
Topic: Drop Your Phone and Read This as Intentioned on a Desktop
Replies: 6
Views: 670

Drop Your Phone and Read This as Intentioned on a Desktop

https://scontent-sjc2-1.xx.fbcdn.net/v/t1.0-9/14720546_10154519867864774_7638392307771472245_n.jpg?oh=9e8ab31d60e1ca72fcfaa6248931fe28&oe=5898CDE7 "My Droid, My Love" Baby doll, what's it like to date my phone? Siri tells me we're not alone. I've been through the Windows phase. I've h...
by ravenrussell
Tue Oct 11, 2016 6:02 am
Forum: Gaming
Topic: Game Banter - u wot m9, 360 "turn-based strategy JRPG"
Replies: 39
Views: 2367

Re: Indigo Prophecy

Azealdread wrote:
BigMush wrote:Speaking of, anyone ever seen the game Until Dawn? Ever seen anything like it except it?

Never found a game like it.



indigo prophecy


Indigo Prophecy is a great game. I've had so much fun with that one. Rise of the original xbox.
by ravenrussell
Mon Oct 10, 2016 6:02 am
Forum: Art and Editing
Topic: My latest project BB-8 Build
Replies: 18
Views: 1178

Re: My latest project BB-8 Build

That is indescribably cool.
by ravenrussell
Mon Oct 10, 2016 5:16 am
Forum: Literature
Topic: Writing prompt #5: Those we admire
Replies: 19
Views: 1193

Re: Writing prompt #5: Those we admire

My brother may be joining ninja. He's working on a novel. Just a heads up to the Lit crew.
by ravenrussell
Mon Oct 10, 2016 5:13 am
Forum: Literature
Topic: Writing prompt #5: Those we admire
Replies: 19
Views: 1193

Re: Writing prompt #5: Those we admire

On it
by ravenrussell
Thu Oct 06, 2016 9:55 am
Forum: Literature
Topic: Loving strength
Replies: 8
Views: 887

Re: Loving strength

I love the subject matter. Truly, I do. As a reader though, I don't like being told I've never felt like you. The beginning part assumes that no one else has felt those things. Maybe taking "you" out might change that. Giving that "you" a character name, or some other reference p...
by ravenrussell
Thu Oct 06, 2016 8:50 am
Forum: Literature
Topic: Collected Poems by Raven... HAI ITS PHARA... I LIKE THESE
Replies: 60
Views: 6249

Re: Collected Poems by Raven... HAI ITS PHARA... I LIKE THESE

https://scontent-sea1-1.xx.fbcdn.net/v/t1.0-9/14606320_10154498086814774_7052072513035096467_n.jpg?oh=8b35c9a78dd8128a68e4a944df55ece3&oe=5866920F YOU SEE ME LONELY We painted the town red once Now I watch it drying With phony and bashful smiles I freeze dry my soul so one day you can add your ...
by ravenrussell
Tue Oct 04, 2016 3:08 pm
Forum: Literature
Topic: Leo Rising: Dedicated to my mother
Replies: 3
Views: 636

Re: Leo Rising: Dedicated to my mother

I'm glad you like that line Alice, is the only one I've ever plagiarized. My mom actually copied it from my cousin and had it on a note card when we looked through her stuff after she was dead. She always quoted my cousin with the name Uncle Coyote. Her pen name was Amelia Alive. Both her and my cou...
by ravenrussell
Mon Oct 03, 2016 4:09 am
Forum: Literature
Topic: Exclusive to Ninja, Poems by Russell.
Replies: 38
Views: 2431

Re: Exclusive to Ninja, Poems by Russell.

Thank you so much, for your well thought out words, for your candor, and for the time spent dedicated to helping me get better. I will read, and reread your thoughts, in an attempt to get past my ego. I haven't ever had such an in tune person write so much about one of my poems. I appreciate it more...

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