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Roots

Postby betweenraindrops » Sun Apr 30, 2017 8:57 pm

We spend our entire lives looking after one another and our families so how can mankind have been made selfish?
In absolute veracity, we've devolved into a state of avarice and there down below we brood and sulk and hate and defy because of heightened and undeserving pride.
The only question left to ask concerns how we may get back to our roots.
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Re: Roots

Postby ravenrussell » Mon May 01, 2017 12:24 am

Beautiful and well written. Place in the perfect time period. Keep writing, I would love to see more.

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Re: Roots

Postby ravenrussell » Mon May 01, 2017 1:10 am

bump
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Re: Roots

Postby ink » Tue May 02, 2017 5:27 pm

betweenraindrops wrote:We spend our entire lives looking after one another and our families so how can mankind have been made selfish?
In absolute veracity, we've devolved into a state of avarice and there down below we brood and sulk and hate and defy because of heightened and undeserving pride.
The only question left to ask concerns how we may get back to our roots.


word... im just going to let that simmer.
we are, what we allow to occupy us..





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Re: Roots

Postby betweenraindrops » Sat Jul 22, 2017 6:33 am

ravenrussell wrote:Beautiful and well written. Place in the perfect time period. Keep writing, I would love to see more.

-rjk


Thank you I will!

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