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Roots

Posted: Sun Apr 30, 2017 8:57 pm
by betweenraindrops
We spend our entire lives looking after one another and our families so how can mankind have been made selfish?
In absolute veracity, we've devolved into a state of avarice and there down below we brood and sulk and hate and defy because of heightened and undeserving pride.
The only question left to ask concerns how we may get back to our roots.

Re: Roots

Posted: Mon May 01, 2017 12:24 am
by ravenrussell
Beautiful and well written. Place in the perfect time period. Keep writing, I would love to see more.

-rjk

Re: Roots

Posted: Mon May 01, 2017 1:10 am
by ravenrussell
bump
//bump

Re: Roots

Posted: Tue May 02, 2017 5:27 pm
by ink
betweenraindrops wrote:We spend our entire lives looking after one another and our families so how can mankind have been made selfish?
In absolute veracity, we've devolved into a state of avarice and there down below we brood and sulk and hate and defy because of heightened and undeserving pride.
The only question left to ask concerns how we may get back to our roots.


word... im just going to let that simmer.

Re: Roots

Posted: Sat Jul 22, 2017 6:33 am
by betweenraindrops
ravenrussell wrote:Beautiful and well written. Place in the perfect time period. Keep writing, I would love to see more.

-rjk


Thank you I will!