Eternal Haiku

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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby ravenrussell » Sat Dec 31, 2016 5:35 am

Until you switched sides
Stitches be past my good grace
seppuku ninjas
Peace to all.
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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby ravenrussell » Mon Jan 02, 2017 2:59 am

seppuku ninjas
looking up weapons online
blades unbright enough
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Re: Eternal Haiku *New Rules*

Postby ravenrussell » Tue Jan 03, 2017 6:32 am

/advtf /advtf /advtf /queen /phara2 /phara2 /queen /advtf

I would love to reinvigorate this thread. Ravenrussell, offical helper of threads marked Literature, or Lit.

//How about we change the basic rhyme configuration of a haiku.

instead of 5 syllables, 7, 5 syllables,
let's make it 7 syllables, 9, 7 syllables.

//and remember you copy the last line of the previous haiku into the first line of yours.

/advtf /advtf /advtf /advtf /advtf /advtf /advtf /advtf /advtf

7
9
7

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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby Zansi'Vara » Sun Feb 05, 2017 9:25 pm

Blades unbright enough to be
Considered by emperor or king
In shadows, they wait to sing

(I love this idea, Raven. I suck at keeping up on forum life, but I have returned from the edge of death to assist in reviving this thread.)
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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby DJ_Darkside » Wed Feb 08, 2017 5:04 am

In shadows, they wait to sing
The dead, the damned, the eternal blight
To take your soul to the light
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I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I am not. Kurt Cobain
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ALL HAIL LIEUTENANT DOCTOR COOLCHUNKIA ESQUIRE THE THIRD JR.!!! Lest she blow chunks of cool up yo asssss!!!
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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby NaranjaRa » Wed Feb 08, 2017 6:47 am

To take your soul to the light
Pajama bottoms filled to the brim
Cheeseburger pickle muffins

see! i haz werds too (sun)
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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby DJ_Darkside » Wed Feb 08, 2017 6:20 pm

Cheeseburger pickle muffins
A Mustard stained white yellow soul
Pregnancy sucks, I want more

Words are fun! /flame
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ALL HAIL LIEUTENANT DOCTOR COOLCHUNKIA ESQUIRE THE THIRD JR.!!! Lest she blow chunks of cool up yo asssss!!!
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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby Zansi'Vara » Thu Feb 09, 2017 4:33 am

Pregnancy sucks, I want more
Children, more quickly, twins or triplets,
Mormon Jesus commands it
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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby NaranjaRa » Thu Feb 09, 2017 7:33 am

this thread /rotfl
*ahem*

Mormon Jesus commands it
Princess Pickle Bunny commands it
star-spangled soup for your mom



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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby Zansi'Vara » Thu Feb 09, 2017 8:23 am

Star-spangled soup for your mom
Pa gets the American flag steak
Little Billy gets NOTHING.
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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby Zansi'Vara » Wed Feb 22, 2017 4:59 pm

Little Billy gets NOTHING
That was a strange line to finish with
Shadows dance across the walls
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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby DJ_Darkside » Wed Mar 01, 2017 12:46 am

Shadows dance across the walls
People are dancing across my halls
Shut up I'm trying to sleep
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ALL HAIL LIEUTENANT DOCTOR COOLCHUNKIA ESQUIRE THE THIRD JR.!!! Lest she blow chunks of cool up yo asssss!!!
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/anna hack! :kiss:
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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby Zansi'Vara » Sat Mar 25, 2017 4:56 am

(OH SHIT I DIDN'T NOTICE ANYONE REPLIED)

Shut up I'm trying to sleep
My eyes are heavy, my mind alive,
In darkness, I meet myself
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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby NaranjaRa » Mon Mar 27, 2017 12:14 am

In darkness, I meet myself
I smear butter on my face and dance
Let us make it rain biscuits!
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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby Zansi'Vara » Mon Mar 27, 2017 2:20 am

Let us make it rain biscuits!
Donuts, bagels, load the pastry bombs!
The baking war has begun
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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby NaranjaRa » Mon Mar 27, 2017 5:03 am

The baking war has begun
Lamentations for the fallen cakes
Pie claims victory today
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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby Zansi'Vara » Mon Mar 27, 2017 9:53 am

Pie claims victory today
The subjugation of cake begins
Lo, the horrors of warfare
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