Eternal Haiku

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Postby Rivoc » Sat Apr 23, 2016 5:17 am

:D

My hot dog is bare
I never wear a condom
What's this burning? Crabs??
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ravenrussell
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Postby ravenrussell » Mon Apr 25, 2016 6:22 pm

What's this burning? Crabs??
Crustacean immolation
Crawling frustration
Peace to all.
-Raven
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DJ_Darkside
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Postby DJ_Darkside » Mon Apr 25, 2016 6:33 pm

Crawling frustration
Immortal dedication
Higher realization
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I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I am not. Kurt Cobain
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ALL HAIL LIEUTENANT DOCTOR COOLCHUNKIA ESQUIRE THE THIRD JR.!!! Lest she blow chunks of cool up yo asssss!!!
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/anna hack! :kiss:
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Postby ravenrussell » Mon Apr 25, 2016 7:27 pm

Higher realization
Buds or suds denying bliss
Kissed, pursed lips, spent wrong
Peace to all.
-Raven
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Postby DJ_Darkside » Mon Apr 25, 2016 7:39 pm

Kissed, pursed lips, spent wrong
Lust. Forgotten Innocence
Hidden scars still bleed
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I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I am not. Kurt Cobain
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ALL HAIL LIEUTENANT DOCTOR COOLCHUNKIA ESQUIRE THE THIRD JR.!!! Lest she blow chunks of cool up yo asssss!!!
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/anna hack! :kiss:
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Zansi'Vara
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Postby Zansi'Vara » Mon Apr 25, 2016 9:00 pm

Hidden scars still bleed
Wrists weep in solemn silence
The dark forgives all
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Postby Zansi'Vara » Mon Apr 25, 2016 9:02 pm

Side note, holy shit you guys, I love these so much. DJ, amazing lines, I love the rhyming lines, damn son. Raven! What a way to enter the haiku, buddy! Holy shit I love it! Welcome to Ninja, by the way! :D
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Postby ravenrussell » Mon Apr 25, 2016 11:50 pm

The dark forgives all
These ninjas devastate day
Black confessions purged

Thank you for the compliment. Darkside be spinning the hits my way.
Peace to all.
-Raven
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Postby girlapaloo » Wed Apr 27, 2016 6:15 pm

<3 the haikus so far
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Postby Zansi'Vara » Thu Apr 28, 2016 3:06 am

Black confessions purged
Like acid and rot it spews
Lies, sins, and evil
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Postby Rivoc » Thu Apr 28, 2016 4:44 am

Lies, sins, and evil
Spin about upon His web
The feeble weevil.
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Postby DJ_Darkside » Thu Apr 28, 2016 4:25 pm

The feeble Weevil
A sacrifice to the Gods
Trampled to a paste


P.S.: I love this shit. A really good exercise to get into the creative mindset and get inspiration going! I now like to try and sneak Haiku's into conversations.... Thanks Zansi
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I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I am not. Kurt Cobain
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ALL HAIL LIEUTENANT DOCTOR COOLCHUNKIA ESQUIRE THE THIRD JR.!!! Lest she blow chunks of cool up yo asssss!!!
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/anna hack! :kiss:
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Postby Zansi'Vara » Thu Apr 28, 2016 9:36 pm

Trample to a paste
Mind smashed by gold on lemon
Totally wasted


My absolute pleasure, DJ. Seriously, I'm just really overwhelmingly happy to have people participating. I love to see all of your work and everyone else's. :D
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Postby Rivoc » Fri Apr 29, 2016 3:24 am

Totally wasted
On the couch, my ass pasted
Can't get up, face it.
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Postby Corgimom » Fri Apr 29, 2016 3:41 am

My Hot Dog is bare
but the corgi will still eat
it is a good treat
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Postby Zansi'Vara » Fri Apr 29, 2016 5:30 am

You missed a page, there, Corgi. x3
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//wrestles darkness...WINS!
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Postby AliceElite » Mon May 02, 2016 4:16 am

can't get up, face it
only that blissful darkness
is my dear reward
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Postby Rivoc » Mon May 02, 2016 4:44 am

Is my dear reward
Retired, unfit, alone,
Freedom- my keyboard.
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Postby ravenrussell » Tue May 03, 2016 6:58 am

Freedom- my keyboard
Jism coated, backspace gone
Lust like love but stroked.
Peace to all.
-Raven
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Postby Corgimom » Wed May 04, 2016 1:40 pm

Zansi'Vara wrote:You missed a page, there, Corgi. x3


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Postby Corgimom » Thu May 05, 2016 10:14 pm

Zansi'Vara wrote:You missed a page, there, Corgi. x3


so it would appear and getting something witty out of that was hard
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Postby AliceElite » Fri May 06, 2016 3:51 am

Lust - like love, but stroked
Becomes something different:
Anticipation.
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Postby Rivoc » Sat May 14, 2016 3:15 am

Anticipation.
Motherfuck! I hate to wait!
Urge to kill, rising!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sX0CbA4718A
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Postby Zansi'Vara » Tue May 17, 2016 3:57 am

Urge to kill, rising
Hot blood rushing through my veins
Exhilarating.
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Postby Rivoc » Tue May 17, 2016 4:18 am

Exhilarating
Chomp down a Peppermint Patty
On a mountaintop
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