Eternal Haiku

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Postby PhlawlessPhelon » Tue May 17, 2016 4:41 am

On a mountaintop
I look down and see beauty
I like mountaintops
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Postby Zansi'Vara » Tue May 17, 2016 7:04 pm

I, like mountaintops,
Though touched by the winds of change,
Will never ascend
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Postby Corgimom » Sun May 22, 2016 3:50 am

Will never ascend
I ride in this human shell
breath never stops

As I re read this in the light of day I should have said breath ever sings

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Postby ImmaculateStiletto » Sun May 22, 2016 9:16 am

Breath never stops
As my soul restlessly awaits
For its ascension

I am awake in pain and came across this thread. I love it and just had to join in. Haikus were one of my favorite learning moments in middle school and high school.
Have a Blessed Day
Hugs N Kisses :)
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Postby Rivoc » Sun May 22, 2016 8:18 pm

For its ascension
I will sacrifice it all
This is why I'm here.
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Postby ravenrussell » Sun May 22, 2016 9:04 pm

This is why i'm here
Seventh generation birthed
Cob-webbed womb dusted

For some reason thought of this song while writing this.

http://youtu.be/EHC9HE7vazI
Peace to all.
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Postby Zansi'Vara » Fri Jun 03, 2016 7:27 am

Cob-webbed womb dusted
Can apples grow beards, or nah?
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Postby Rivoc » Fri Jun 10, 2016 10:34 pm

Refrigerator
Open out of habit. Why?
I don't remember.
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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby Zansi'Vara » Thu Sep 22, 2016 3:49 am

I don't remember
The soft sound of your laughter
Time erases you
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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby ink » Thu Sep 22, 2016 3:58 am

time erases you
yet in time you return again
light breaks forth nearby





//fixed :tongue:
we are, what we allow to occupy us..





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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby Zansi'Vara » Thu Sep 22, 2016 4:25 am

(I think you may have lost count of your syllables there, ink. 5, 7, 5, remember? xD)

Light breaks forth nearby,
The lake shimmers peacefully
If only time stopped
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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby Phara » Thu Sep 22, 2016 4:40 am

i fuckin love this thread.

i am a haiku
so said queen phara the cray
brain not working now
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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby ravenrussell » Thu Sep 22, 2016 4:53 am

brain not working now
emotions autopilot
through voyages seen
Peace to all.
-Raven
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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby Phara » Thu Sep 22, 2016 5:15 am

lololol five to five eh raven?

made me giggle with the blunt dangling out of my mouth

*pretend theres a haiku here*
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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby Zansi'Vara » Thu Sep 22, 2016 6:15 am

Through voyages seen
And journies yet untravelled
I'll always float home
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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby ink » Thu Sep 22, 2016 6:33 am

Through voyages seen
through thick and thin, deep within
sleepy face dream time
we are, what we allow to occupy us..





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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby girlapaloo » Thu Oct 06, 2016 7:50 pm

Sleepy face dream time
Want to feel its warm embrace
Again it escapes
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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby DJ_Darkside » Sat Oct 15, 2016 11:02 pm

again it escapes
the cold heart of death
beating without sound
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I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I am not. Kurt Cobain
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ALL HAIL LIEUTENANT DOCTOR COOLCHUNKIA ESQUIRE THE THIRD JR.!!! Lest she blow chunks of cool up yo asssss!!!
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/anna hack! :kiss:
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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby DJ_Darkside » Tue Oct 18, 2016 1:54 pm

Beating without sound
God damn my head fucking hurts
A hole in the wall


Sorry I messed the first one up...
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I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I am not. Kurt Cobain
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ALL HAIL LIEUTENANT DOCTOR COOLCHUNKIA ESQUIRE THE THIRD JR.!!! Lest she blow chunks of cool up yo asssss!!!
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/anna hack! :kiss:
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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby ink » Tue Oct 18, 2016 8:10 pm

A hole in the wall
an opportunity yall
build a step exit left
we are, what we allow to occupy us..





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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby ravenrussell » Sat Oct 29, 2016 6:10 am

Build a step exit left
where the prop man waits alone
scene changer failure
Peace to all.
-Raven
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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby Zansi'Vara » Tue Nov 01, 2016 7:59 pm

Scene changer failure
Lights flicker and dim to black
The show is over
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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby ravenrussell » Fri Dec 30, 2016 8:45 am

The show is over
replace vinyl record floor
digital basement
Peace to all.
-Raven
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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby Charmosa » Sat Dec 31, 2016 12:25 am

digital basement
telling the world to byte me
this haiku will rhyme
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Re: Eternal Haiku

Postby ghostdogg » Sat Dec 31, 2016 2:43 am

This haiku will rhyme
You have been my dude from time
Until you switched sides

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